Thursday, January 24, 2013

Writing 1 Class Notes -- January 23 (Week 2)

Greetings!

We had a good class this week.  Even though they wanted to play "Funglish" again, we began the class with a Quick Write.  The writing prompt started out as "If I could have a role on a TV program, I would be on ______ because ______ ."  We altered it to "If I could have a role in something/anything ________ " in order to give them more choices.   As part of our beginning of class activities, I'm also introducing well-known Latin words and phrases.  I've done this in the past, but haven't done it yet this year.  This week's Latin words were ab absurdo (to the absurd -- to go on at length with a ridiculous explanation) Absolvo!  (I quit -- a phrase used by judges at at acquittal) and a capite ad calcem (from the head to the heal -- we would say from head to toe)

Regarding Grammar, since my aim is that we become masters of the comma this semester, we discussed Restrictive (Essential) and Nonrestrictive (Nonessential) clauses.  Commas are used for nonrestrictive clauses or phrases which are groups of words that can be omitted from a sentence and not change the basic meaning.  As a class we worked through some practice exercises.  

We've begun our first literature selection, The Strange Case of Dr. Jekyll and Mr. Hyde.  I've given the student 3 worksheets that they are to be working on AS THEY READ.  I want to emphasize that the best course is to be filling in the charts with details of the book on a weekly basis.  In the past, some students have left this until the end of the book and have moaned and groaned about how hard it was.  Though I call them worksheets, they are really charts for them to record their observations about a character, a theme, and vocabulary.  One of the essays they will write this semester is a literary analysis for which they will use their worksheet as a resource.  



Part of the writing discussion this semester will center on "style."  The basic building blocks of good essays are well-constructed sentences.  We'll talk about word choices and various ways to form sentences for different effects.  To get us to think a little harder this week, we "unpacked" a quote from Gertrude Stein, "Why should a sequence of words be anything but a pleasure?"

The students are to be working on their rough drafts for the Narrative Essays.  They should be prepared to hand in their prewrites along with the rough drafts next week.

Assignments for Next Week:
-- Read Ch. 3 & 4 from Jekyll/Hyde
-- Choose 2 questions for each chapter from the study guide to answer
-- Begin filling in details for the Character & Theme charts.
-- Rough draft of the Narrative Essay

This week's blogs 
Resources for Dr. Jekyll & Mr. Hyde  (Including a link to an audio version)
Class Notes

Have a great week!
Mrs. Prichard

Resources for The Strange Case of Dr. Jekyll and Mr. Hyde

For this semester, I've chosen a book that as fascinating and profound themes, and yet is not too difficult.  Though written in the late Victorian period, the vocabulary doesn't seem as challenging as other works from that time.  Technically, it is considered a novella, a shorter work than a full-length novel.

As students are reading, the sites listed below might help them, especially when we write the Character or Theme Essays later in the semester.

LibriVox recording -- For strong auditory learners, hearing the book may help them comprehend more of it. This site has a free recording of the whole book.

University of Virginia's e-text version -- Should a student lose or be unable to find their copy of the book, this site gives the written version of the book in its entirety.

A study in dualism:  The Strange Case of Dr. Jekyll and Mr. Hyde -- A literary analysis of this aspect of the book.

Dr. Jekyll and Mr. Hyde Notes and Analysis -- Like the SparkNotes site for this book, this site gives summaries and added insights, and should be read AFTER the student has read (or listened to) the text.

Vocabulary Worksheet for Dr. Jekyll/Mr. Hyde


Vocabulary Worksheet

INSTRUCTIONS:  For this book, the students will compile the vocabulary lists.  As you read each chapter, make a list of the unfamiliar or interesting words.  You are responsible for finding the definitions and roots of the words.  Fill in the table below with your words.  As part of the end of the book discussions and presentations, each student will have some kind of vocabulary project for the others to do.  (eg. crossword puzzle, wordsearch, quiz, etc.)


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Themes Worksheet for Dr. Jekyll/Mr. Hyde


Themes Worksheet

Theme:  ___________________

Stevenson’s perspective
Supporting passages
Your opinion




Character Worksheet for Dr. Jekyll/Mr. Hyde



Character Analysis Worksheet

Character
Supporting Passage
(page number; direct quotes)
Words

Actions

Appearance

Thoughts

Effects on Other People

Analysis:



Saturday, January 19, 2013

Writing 1 Class Notes -- January 16 (Week 1)

Greetings!

We're back at it again!  It was good to see the students again.  They are such a great group of kids.  For those new to my classes, I write a weekly class update after each class.  Usually, I try to do it on Wednesday.  Unfortunately, I returned home from classes not feeling too well; I'm just now getting back on track.

Usually we begin each class with a Quick Write.  Since I had gotten a new game for Christmas, Funglish, we played that.  This game is a vocabulary guessing game that uses adjectives as clues.  After a couple of rounds, the class got the hang of it, and we had a hearty game.  Anytime I can get my students to think creatively and intentionally about words, I count it as a success.

The students received fresh syllabi for this semester.  (I've attached a copy to this e-mail and have it posted on the blog site.)  As you can see, we'll be reading from The Strange Case of Dr. Jekyll and Mr. Hyde, O. Henry short stories, and short poems.  They will be writing 3 fresh essays and re-write an essay of their choosing.  Our grammar focus for this semester is punctuation.  Many of the marks I make on their rough drafts have to do with the misplaced or forgotten comma. 

To begin our discussion of the Robert Louis Stevenson book, we looked at background information about the author, Victorian life and times, and the novel.  They are to read chapters 1and 2; from the study guide they are to choose 2 questions for each chapter and write out their answers.

Our first grammar lesson (link to the blog) for the semester dealt with commas and compound sentences.  Hopefully, by the end of the semester they will be "masters" of the comma. (The other links are for further study.)  They have a worksheet due next week.


The first essay assigned for this semester is a Narrative Essay.  For this week they're to work on their pre-writes.  Pre-writing activity includes any brainstorming needed before they start writing the rough draft.  This can also include an outline or mind map; this is also a good time to do any research.

Assignments for Next Week:
-- Read Chapters 1 & 2 for Jekyll/Hyde
-- From the study guide, answer two questions for Ch. 1 and two for Ch. 1.
-- Week 1 Grammar worksheet on commas (only the section on compound sentences)
-- Pre-write for the Narrative Essay.

Blogs for this week:
Syllabus
Dr. Jekyll/ Mr. Hyde background info.
Dr. Jekyll/Mr. Hyde study guide
Week 1 Grammar Lesson
Week 1 Grammar Worksheet
Narrative Essay
Class Notes

Study Guide for Dr. Jekyll & Mr. Hyde



Study Guide
The Strange Case of Dr. Jekyll and Mr. Hyde
Robert Louis Stevenson

Chapter 1 – Story of the Door
  1. In the beginning of the book, the readers are presented with what seems like a detective novel, beginning with a sinister figure, a mysterious act of violence, and hints of blackmail and secret scandal.  Give examples from the text (direct quotations) that indicate these aspects.  Include the phrases and page numbers.
  2. What of the characteristics of the two men, Enfield and Utterson, seem to be Victorian attributes?  In other words, in what ways do they act and speak that different from men of our day?
  3. Victorian society highly valued reputation, even at times at the expense of reality.  What ideas about reputation can you draw from this first chapter?
  4. A major theme of this book is the conflict between the rational (reasonable, logical) and the supernatural (otherworldly, metaphysical).  What examples of this conflict do you find in the first chapter?


Chapter 2 – Search for Mr. Hyde
  1. What causes Mr. Utterson to be concerned about Dr. Jekyll, and what does he do about it?
  2. What significance does his dream have?  What affect does it have on the plot?  On the atmosphere? Symbolically?
  3. Describe Hyde’s appearance.  Give specific details (along with page numbers).  What significance does the word “troglodyte” have? 
  4. What is Dr. Lanyon’s relationship to Dr. Jekyll?  Describe his opinions and response to Jekyll’s experiments.


hapter 3 – Dr. Jekyll Was Quite at Ease
  1. What attracted people to spending time with Utterson?  What was Jekyll’s opinion of him?
  2. What reasons does Jekyll give for his interest in Hyde?  Are they acceptable to Utterson?  Why?  Why not? 
  3. Why do you think Jekyll asks for justice for Hyde?


Chapter 4 – The Carew Murder Case
  1. How much later does the next part of the story take place?
  2. List 5 new characteristics that the readers learn about Hyde.
  3. How can Hyde be viewed as “otherworldly”  as a result of this chapter and the author’s descriptions?


Chapter 5 – Incident of the Letter
  1. How does Utterson behave like the proper Victorian English gentleman?
  2. How is the importance of reputation expressed in this chapter?  Which is more important?  Reputation or truth?  Outward appearances or evil potential?
  3. How is London described?  What is the mood or atmosphere caused by this description?
  4. One analysis of this book says that much “of Dr. Jekyll and Mr. Hyde is written in a brisk, businesslike, and factual way, like a police report on a strange affair rather than a novel.”  Do you agree or disagree?  Why?  Give specific examples from the book to back up your opinion.


Chapter 6 – Remarkable Incident of Dr. Lanyon
  1. How is Jekyll different when Hyde is not around?
  2. Describe Dr. Lanyon’s condition and situation.  How does he account for his condition?
  3. What might be the reason for the author not telling us exactly what happened to Lanyon?  What other important details are left unexplained at this point?
  4. Why is Utterson both desirous AND reluctant about seeing Jekyll again?


Chapter 7 – Incident at the Window
  1. When Jekyll talks to Utterson and Enfield from his window, what comparison does Stevenson make?
  2. What does Jekyll mean when he says “It will not last very long” to the men?
  3. How did their conversation end?  What do you think happened?


Chapter 8 – The Last Night
  1. How would you describe Jekyll’s butler, Poole?  What are some of his characteristics?  Give specific examples from this and previous chapters.
  2. What was the weather like when they hurry to Jekyll’s house?  What specific language does Stevenson use?  How does this affect the story?
  3. Appearances and decorum continue to be important to Utterson.  Give examples from this chapter.
  4. What reasonable and, to him, logical explanations does Utterson give for the present situation and for Poole’s concerns?
  5. Gothic literature often conveys a sense of the uncanny, of dark and disturbing events or deep secrets that break upon every day life.  Could this book be considered a gothic novel?  Explain.
  6. Give 5 – 6 words that describe the atmosphere of this chapter.


Chapter 9 – Dr. Lanyon’s Narrative
  1. What mysteries are cleared up in this chapter?  What details remain unclear or unexplained?
  2. Why was Jekyll’s experiments with “transcendental medicine” and its results so shocking to Lanyon?


Chapter 10 – Henry Jekyll’s Full Statement of the Case
  1. Describe the struggle that Jekyll, as a young man, had between his good side and his bad side.  Give specifics from the story.
  2. What was the dual life that he led?
  3. Why was Hyde smaller in stature?  What were his other physical characteristics?
  4. Why did Jekyll cave in and take the potion after repressing Hyde?
  5. What further points of the mystery of Jekyll and Hyde are cleared up?  Do any questions remain unanswered?
  6. What motivated Jekyll in the first place? What drove him to separate his personalities?

The Strange Case of Dr. Jekyll and Mr. Hyde (background))



The Strange Case of Dr. Jekyll and Mr. Hyde
Robert Louis Stevenson


Information about Robert Louis Stevenson

            Robert Louis Stevenson, born in 1850 in Edinburgh, Scotland, was a sickly child. His father was a designer of lighthouses, and he wanted his only son to study engineering.  However, when Stevenson entered Edinburgh University, he chose to study literature.  After graduation Stevenson was forced to split his time between the French Riviera and southern England because the warmer climates helped his deteriorating health, now known to have been caused by tuberculosis. His travels in France led to his first book, An Inland Voyage (1878), the story of a canoe trip on the country’s many canals. While in France, he fell in love with Fanny Osbourne, a married American.
            In 1879, Stevenson undertook an extremely risky voyage to California, where Fanny was divorcing her husband. The dreadful transatlantic crossing to New York and the cross-country train trip to the West Coast nearly killed him. The strain was so hard on his health that when he reached California and finally married Fanny, he was barely able to stand. His doctor told Fanny that her new husband could live for only a few months.
            Fortunately, the doctor was wrong. The couple returned to Scotland. It was there that
Stevenson began to write his first great success, Treasure Island (1883), the thrilling story of a
swashbuckling pirate named Long John Silver.  The writer’s deteriorating health prompted the
couple to move to the south of France, where Stevenson completed A Child’s Garden of Verses
(1885). At his next home, in southern England, Stevenson wrote Kidnapped. Nonetheless, financial
worries were never far away. One night Stevenson had a nightmare so strange that he decided to use it as the basis for a novel. This novel, The Strange Case of Dr Jekyll and Mr Hyde (1886), became one of Stevenson’s most popular creations and helped to ease his financial strain. 
            In 1888, an American publisher asked Stevenson to write a travel book about the South Pacific. The couple jumped at the chance to escape to the tropics. They chartered a yacht and sailed from San Francisco to the Marquesas Islands, Tahiti, and Hawaii. The author’s health improved in the tropical sun, and in 1890 the Stevensons decided to settle in Samoa.
            On his estate in Samoa, Stevenson finished David Balfour (1893), a sequel to Kidnapped, as well as several books about nature and life in the South Seas. His descriptions of his exotic and romantic lifestyle captivated readers. During his years in Samoa, legends grew up about Stevenson that led to his reputation of being one of the most beloved storytellers of his time.  
            Stevenson died in Samoa on December 3, 1894, at the age of forty-four. At the time of his death, he was working with friends in Scotland to prepare an edition of his complete works.

Introduction to the Novel

            Why has Dr Jekyll and Mr Hyde touched so many readers so powerfully? One answer lies in
the spirit of the time in which it was written. At the end of the 1800s, Britain was experiencing a period of intense social, economic, and spiritual change, after many decades of confident growth and national self-fulfillment. Dr Jekyll and Mr. Hyde perfectly captured some readers’ fears that their carefully built society was hypocritical.
            Stevenson was aware of the new ideas about economics, science, and the workings of the mind.  To many readers, Dr Jekyll and Mr Hyde was a symbolic representation of these threats to traditional British society. Political reforms had given many more men the right to vote, and the working classes were beginning to flex their political muscles. Karl Marx’s ideas about the struggle for power among the different social classes were becoming more influential. To some of Britain’s upper-class readers,  the character of Edward Hyde represented the increasing political power of the working class.
            Other readers saw in the novella echoes of Charles Darwin, who earlier in the century had challenged the long-held religious belief in God’s creation of the universe. Darwin had claimed that life-forms developed as a result of evolution, the extremely slow and gradual changes species underwent in response to their environments.  Gone was the certainty of the religious model of life. It was replaced by social Darwinism, a radical new conception of life as a struggle in which only the fittest survived. Some readers considered Hyde to be a model of the strong yet evil individual who would survive while Jekyll fell. Hyde was the natural man, free of the civilizing influences  of society and religion. Stevenson himself had received an extremely strict religious upbringing, which  emphasized sin and the punishments of hell. He seems to have reacted against this upbringing, and the conflict between religion and science probably interested him greatly.
            Still other readers found in Dr Jekyll and Mr Hyde a reflection of the new ideas about the workings of the human mind. A Viennese doctor named Sigmund Freud had begun the investigations
that would lead him to create psychoanalysis, a method of analyzing psychic phenomena and treating emotional disorders. Freud believed that human beings are powerfully influenced by impulses of which they are not aware and which are often expressed in dreams. To many readers, Hyde represented Dr. Jekyll’s subconscious desire to be freed from his society’s restrictions.

THE TIME AND PLACE
            The novella takes place in London in the 1880s. The settings include Jekyll’s fine home in a formerly grand neighborhood now in decay; Lanyon’s comfortable home in Cavendish Square, where
many distinguished doctors have their houses and offices; and Hyde’s house in Soho, a part of London known for its immigrant populations.

The Victorian Era
            Robert Louis Stevenson was born at the height of the Victorian Era, which stretched from the 1830s to the beginning of the 1900s. Britain’s Queen Victoria came to the throne in 1837 at the age of
eighteen and ruled until her death in 1901.  During her sixty-four-year reign, Great Britain was the world’s leading economic and military power and controlled a vast empire.
            Queen Victoria’s reign was a period of intense change in many arenas. Railroads and a postal system expanded to link almost every corner of the nation, making transportation and communication much faster. Medical and sanitary advances led to improvements in health. The government began to support schools financially. Political reforms allowed more people to participate in self-government. Industry grew rapidly, while agriculture became less important to the economy. Cities like London, Manchester, and Glasgow became densely populated as masses of people flocked to them in search of work.
            The prosperous decades between 1850 and 1870 were characterized by a general optimism and a sense of accomplishment. By the 1880s, however, pessimism and worry had begun to cloud the thoughts of many Victorians. With the increase in the urban population, poverty became a formidable problem.  The strength of Britain’s vast empire was challenged by difficult foreign wars. Workers  demanded more power, and women were entering the workforce in greater numbers. The changes in traditional society disturbed and frightened many Britons.
            It was at this historical juncture that Stevenson wrote The Strange Case of Dr Jekyll and Mr Hyde. As you read, look for signs of a society undergoing major changes





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