Friday, August 30, 2019

Writing 1 Class Notes -- Week 2 (August 29)

Greetings!

I started the class by having students make name cards to put in front of themselves.  With a full class, I need all of the help I can get to learn their names.  

Our Quick Write for today was in recognition National Bow Tie Day, which was on August 28.  I asked the students to describe their personal fashion styles.  One thing that we all are learning about one another is how different our personal preferences are.  We had a mix of likes and dislikes about jeans, shoes, shorts, shirts, etc.  

We began our Words of the Day, which this semester will be connected to our vocabulary from Animal Farm. The words listed below provide some background information related to the intent of George Orwell's book.  
totalitarianism -- a government system in an autocratic authority (a dictator) maintains control and the general population is subservient to the authority's rule
communism -- a totalitarian system of government in which a single authoritarian party owns control of production and distribution of goods and which eliminates private property.
socialism -- an economic and government system that advocates collective or government ownership and/or regulation of property and production
capitalism -- an economic system characterized by private or corporate ownership of property and production.

Before we proceeded the bulk of our the content of the day, I walked the students through the My GradeBook site.  Some of them had already signed in.  If you or your student have not done that yet, go to this document, Instructions for My GradeBook,  for instructions.  As I told the students, they might never need to go to this site if they are keeping track of their homework.  However, if they are absent for a number of weeks or have forgotten if they have handed something in or not, this is a good place to find that information.  As parents, you can check it to see if work is getting in or to check on current grade status.  It is by no means required of students or parents to regularly check this online grade book.  

Students were to hand in their rough drafts of their Descriptive Essays.  For those who want to hand in digital copies, they can choose any of the following options:  email a Word attachment, send a PDF of the paper, share a Google Doc, or share a OneDrive doc.  This week I will go over their essays and hand them back next week.  They will then make corrections and revise their rough drafts into final drafts.

On the title page of Animal Farm, the author adds the subtitle, "A Fairy Story."  We discussed common fairy tale elements (i.e. magic, talking animals, evil villains, heroes, etc.) and then tried to predict what we might encounter in Animal Farm, which also includes political and economic issues.  I took a picture of the predictions that I wrote on the board and we'll see how accurate we were when we get to the end of the book.  For this next week, students are to read chapters 1 and 2, to complete 3 reader responses (either study guide questions or ala carte options) and to choose and define 3 vocabulary words.  They are also to write a response for "What Makes a Good Leader?"  (Note:  Below are a couple links to audio versions of the book.)

Our last topic of the day was Grammar.  During the first semester of Writing 1, I do a Parts of Speech Unit. The 8 parts of speech are the categories for the words we use.  This information is fundamental for writing and revising.  For this unit, the students are divided into groups and will research and then present a lesson on one their assigned part of speech.  These lessons need to include explanations/direct instruction, examples, an activity, and homework for practice.  Students were given a handout explaining the unit, a planning worksheet, a review packet, and a pre-test.  They are to take the pre-test at home before reading through the review packet.  Next week they will sign up for a part of speech.

Assignments for Next Week (Sept. 5)
-- Read Chapters 1 & 2 of Animal Farm
-- Complete 3 Reader Responses
-- Complete 3 Vocabulary Words
-- Sign and get parent's initials for Class Policies handout
-- Complete the Parts of Speech Pre-Test

Links for This Week
Class Notes

Have a beautiful Labor Day Weekend!
Mrs. Prichard

Parts of Speech Pre-Test


In the list of words below, circle the nouns and cross out the verbs.  Do nothing to the words that are neither nouns nor verbs.


Cat
Sing
Happy
Sofa
Liberty
Drove
Is
Camel
Very
Laughter
Traveled
Under
After
Dog
Rug
Cleaned
Quickly
Stove


In the sentences below, circle the adjectives.  Underline the adverbs.
1.    The silly, little girl danced wildly yesterday at the birthday party.
2.    My older brother generously loaned me fifty dollars from his very scanty rainy day fund.
3.    Tomorrow I will carefully bake that complicated recipe for my mother’s favorite dessert.


In the sentences below, underline the pronouns.
1.    Bob, your father wants you to call him.
2.    The beautiful concert brought the crowd to its feet.
3.    Jane has her own ideas, but her family doesn’t agree with them.

Put parentheses around each of the prepositional phrases:
1.    For many years, there had been groups of campers in the fields near the river.
2.    All of the trees at the farm died during the winter.
3.    After the game, the crowd of noisy fans cheered with a loud shout.

 Underline the conjunctions in the sentences below.
1.    Although we weren’t hungry, we ate a whole pizza and drank all the soda.
2.    The teacher asked many hard and confusing questions, yet we could answer them all.
3.    Neither the cat nor the dog obeys our commands, but we still love them.

Underline the interjections in the following sentences:
1.    Well, I don’t think so.
2.    Marvelous! You have done an incredible job.
3.    Oh no.  This is terrible.

Fill in the blanks for the following definitions:
1.    A _____________________    is a word or words used to join other words, phrases, or clauses.
2.    An ______________________   is a word or group of words expressing emotion or feeling, however slight.  Also, this part of speech doesn’t fit into any of the other categories of the parts of speech.
3.    A _________________________ links nounspronouns and phrases to other words in a sentence.
4.    An __________________________can modify a verb, an adjective, an adverb, a phrase, or a clause. It  indicates manner, time, place, cause, or degree and answers questions such as "how," "when," "where," "how much".
5.    An __________________________ modifies a noun or a pronoun by describing, identifying, or quantifying words.

6.    A ___________________________ can replace a noun or another pronoun. 

Parts of Speech Review Packet

INTERJECTIONS
Definition:  An interjection is a word or phrase that expresses emotion or feeling, gives a command or fills a silence.  It usually begins a sentence, but sometimes it may interrupt a sentence or be at the end.
Examples (interjections are in bold and underlined):
·         Yikes, it’s hot outside.
·         Ouch!  I hurt my hand!
·         Hmm, that’s a good question.
·         We were, uh, going to call you.
·         Yes, we are going to the store.




VERBS
Definition:  A verb is an action word or a state of being verb.  The verb in a sentence is connected with the subject of the sentence.  Verbs change form according to tense (past, present, future), person (first, second, third), number (singular, plural), and voice (active, passive).  
Some verbs are action words:  sing, dance, jump, eat, run, sit, etc.
Some state of being verbs:  am, is, are, was, were, be, being, been, seems, feels, appears
Helping verbs are added to action verbs to help extend the meaning of the verb, especially with the tense:  have, has, had, do, does, did, can, could, may, might, will, would, shall, should, must, ought to

In the following examples, the verbs (action, state of being, and helping) are underlined and in bold:

·         My cousin sings in the choir.
·         My cousin will sing in the choir.
·         My cousin is a singer in the choir.
·         We drive to school each day.
·         could have driven to school last week.
·         She drove her car all year long.
·         This apple feels squishy.
·         This apple is squishy.
·         Feel this squishy apple.
·         He sounded the alarm.
·         The alarm sounds too loud.



More about VERBS
Tense
Verbs show the time of the action by changing form.  Look at the table below for some examples

Past
(Yesterday)
Present
(Today)
Future
(Tomorrow)
1st person
I walked
I jumped
I sat
I walk
I jump
I sit
I will walk
I will jump
I will sit
2nd person
You walked
You jumped
You sat
You walk
You jump
You sit
You will walk
You will jump
You will sit
3rd person
He walked
She jumped
It sat
He walks
She jumps
It sits
He will walk
She will jump
It will sit





ADJECTIVES
Definition:  Adjectives are words that describe or modify nouns (persons, places, or things) in the sentence. The articles — a, an, and the — are adjectives.  Multiple adjectives can be used to modify/describe a noun. Possessive pronouns are also adjectives (e.g. my, your, his, etc.)

Adjectives answer these questions: what kind, which one, how many, and how much.  They may be placed before the noun (or pronoun), after the noun (or pronoun), or after a linking or helping verb.

In the following sentences, the adjectives are underlined and in bold:
·         The funny movie was the best part of a long day.
·         My old gray sweater has a large hole on the left sleeve.
·         Four dogs ran wildly in the enormous hay field.
·         That blue car belongs to his grumpy Latin teacher.
·         The fifth student in that long line fainted in the hot summer sun.



NOUNS
Definition:  A noun is a word (or phrase or clause) that names a person, place, think, idea, or quality. 
There are several categories of nouns:
Common – every day words, not capitalized (ex:  dog, cat, building, town, man, woman)
Proper – specific names, capitalized (ex:  Spot, Fluffy, Empire State Building, Northfield, Mr. Jones, Sally Forth)
Compound – nouns made up of two or more words (ex:  ice cream, playground, mainstream, brother-in-law)
Collective – nouns that in its singular form denotes many within (ex:  army, company, herd)
Concrete – tangible, touchable things (ex:  rock, ball, bird, house)
Abstract – a quality or idea; something that cannot be touched (ex:  liberty, hope, honesty, love)
Countable – nouns that form their plural with an s or es, that can be counted and numbered (ex:  bugs, projects, boys, girls)
Non-countable – nouns that have no plural and cannot be counted (ex:  poverty, peace, ideas, principles)
Nouns can be used as subjects of a sentence, direct objects, indirect objects, objects of a preposition, and predicate nouns.

In the following sentences, the nouns are underlined and in bold:
·         The dog under the tree had a leash around his neck.
·         My dogScooby, wanted freedom from his collar.
·         The playground in Northfield had a statue of General Washington who fought for liberty.
·         Sarge’s Parlour, a small business, sold ice cream in Storm LakeIowa to many generations of residents.
·         My brother bought a snowmobile because he wanted to have fun during the winter.

Some words can be both a noun and a verb.
Examples:

I had a swim in the lake.
swim in the lake.
I will drive to school.
We had a nice drive.
I watched the third act of the play.
This man can really act.
I wrote a check at the diner.
Will you check to see if it is right.
I have a new dress from Target.
The doctor will dress my wound.
She has a delightful laugh.
laugh all the time.

CONJUNCTIONS
Definition:  A conjunction is a word or words used to join other words, phrases, or clauses.
Coordinating conjunctions:  The conjunctions are used to join words and sentence parts for compound predicates or compound sentences.  To remember the coordinating conjunctions, we use the following acronym:  FANBOYS (For, And, Nor, But, Or, Yet, So)

In the following sentences, the coordinating conjunctions are underlined and in bold:
·         The music was loud, for they had extra speakers.
·         The guitarists were talented, and they played an amazing concert.
·         The drummer couldn’t keep a beat, nor did he know the right kind of music.
·         The bass player tried to ignore the drummer, but he found it impossible.
·         I thought I could stay for the second act, or I could go and eat.
·         I liked the singers in the next act, yet I was really hungry.
·         My friend brought a sandwich, so I ate it and stayed to the very end.

Subordinating Conjunctions:  Subordinating conjunctions connect main clauses (independent clauses) and subordinate clauses (dependent clauses).  In a complex sentence, the role of the subordinating conjunction and the dependent clause is to establish a time, a place, a reason, a condition, a concession, or a comparison for the main clause. The subordinating conjunction provides the bridge between the main clause and the dependent clause.



Below is a list of the most common subordinating conjunctions:

after
although
as
as if
as long as
as much as
as soon as
as though
because
before
even
even if
even though
if
if only
in order that
just as
now
now since
now that
now when
once
provided
provided that
rather than
since
so that
supposing
than
that
though
unless
until
when
whenever
where
whereas
where if
wherever
whether
which
while
who
whoever
why



In the following sentences, the subordinating conjunctions are underlined and in bold:
·         Because I am hungry, I ordered three pizzas.
·         Although I didn’t study, I did well on the test.
·         We are going to visit my grandfather before he goes to the hospital.
·         I do not know if everyone will be here for the reunion.
·         Whenever you travel north, you need to pack a jacket.
·         After we booked our hotel, we searched for good restaurants.
·         We will stay at the resort until the storm passes.
·         We stayed an extra day so that we could go fishing again.


ADVERBS
Definition:  An adverb is a word (or phrase or clause) that modifies or describes a verb, an adjective, or another adverb.   Adverbs answer the following questions:  How? When? Where? To what extent? How much? How often? 

Placement:  Adverbs of one word almost always come before the word modified.  Clauses and phrases should be placed as closely as possible to the verb is modifies.

Formation:  Adverbs can be formed by adding “-ly” to an adjective.  (e.g.  correctly, happily, sparingly)  Another way to form an adverb is to place an adjective in the following formula:  “in a _________ manner.”



In the following sentences, the adverbs are underlined and in bold:
·         The horse lazily meandered through the very dense forest.
·         Her brother playfully teased her yesterday.
·         Tomorrow the band will carefully practice that insanely hard piece.
·         Carefully, John put a foot on the thin ice.
·         Bill stubbornly refused to do his homework.
·         Joan instantly recognized the very famous actor.
·         secretly planned a party for the students.


PREPOSTIONS
Definition:  A preposition is a word that shows the relationship between a noun or pronoun and other words in a sentence.  Prepositions are always the first word of prepositional phrase.  The phrases can serve either as adjectival phrases  (describing/modifying nouns) or as adverbial (describing/modifying verbs)

The Prepositional Phrase:  A prepositional phrase is made up of the preposition at the beginning and the object of the preposition (a noun or pronoun)


Below is a list of the most common prepositions:
about
below
excepting
off
toward
above
beneath
for
on
under
across
beside(s)
from
onto
underneath
after
between
in
out
until
against
beyond
in front of
outside
up
along
but
inside
over
upon
among
by
in spite of
past
up to
around
concerning
instead of
regarding
with
at 
despite
into
since
within
because of
down
like
through
without
before
during
near
throughout
with regard to
behind
except
of
to
with respect to



In the following sentences, the prepositional phrases are in parentheses and the prepositions are underlined and in bold:
·         The cup (of soup) (on the table) was cold.
·         The meeting (before lunch) had been planned (since yesterday).
·         I threw the ball (of yarn) (down the stairs).
·         (Inside the house) (of the old lady) is a book (near the fireplace) (in the living room) that is was written (during the Revolutionary War).
·         I put the suitcase (against the chair) (under the big picture).
·         (Down the road) and (past the mailboxes) ran the red fox (with my lunch) (in his mouth).
·         Once (upon a time) (in a castle) (on a hill), there lived an ogre (with warts) (on his face).


PRONOUNS
Definition:  A Pronoun is a word that takes the place of a nouns.  We can substitute a pronoun for a noun in a sentence.  Pronouns are classified in five (5) different categories. They are personal pronouns, relative pronouns, demonstrative pronouns, indefinite pronouns, and interrogative pronouns. 

Antecedent:  The antecedent is the word or words that the pronoun is substituting. 
Examples:
The lady drank her coffee. She said it was hot.  (lady is the antecedent for her & she; coffee is the antecedent for it)
Roger sat on the chair, but it broke when he sat down. (Roger is the antecedent for he; chair is the antecedent for it)

Below is a chart showing the forms of personal pronouns
Personal Pronouns

Singular

Plural
Person
Nominative
Objective
Possessive

Nominative
Objective
Possessive
1st person
I
me
mine

We
us
ours
2nd person
You
you
yours

You
you
yours
3rd person
He, she, it
him, her, it
his, hers, its

They
them
theirs

In the following sentences, the personal pronouns are underlined and in bold.
·         I gave her the bottle that used to belong to you.
·         She knew right away that it was a collector’s piece.
·         It had been used by Queen Elizabeth in her castle.
·         They say it held the perfume that she used every day.
·         My family has had many antiques in their collection and loves to talk about them.
·         Do you think she will get any money for it?

Reflexive pronouns are a compound of personal pronouns with “self” or “selves.”  They are used when you refer back to the subject of a sentence or clause.
Examples:

·         I saw myself in the mirror.
·         She made herself some lunch.
·         The bird hurt itself when it flew into the window.


Relative pronouns introduce relative clauses (dependent clauses that relate the clause to a noun or pronoun in the sentence).  The five relative pronouns are who, whom, whose, which, that.
Examples:

·         The car that hit me was yellow.
·         The student whose phone just rang should answer it.
·         Jane is the girl who won the contest.
·         Mr. Jones is a man on whom I can rely.


Demonstrative pronouns are pronouns that point out.  They are thisthatthese, and those.
Examples:

·         This is my hat.
·         I like these, not those.
·         That is a great idea.
·         How much money do you want for this?


Indefinite pronouns are pronouns that do not point out specifically. They point out generally. They include such words as another, any, anybody, anyone, anything, both, each, either, everybody, everyone, everything, many, neither, nobody, none, no one, one, other, others, some, somebody, and someone.
Examples:

·         Does anyone have a pencil?
·         Please stand with the others.
·         No one can solve this equation.
·         Both of you should do the dishes.


Interrogative pronouns ask questions. Whowhomwhosewhichand what are interrogative pronouns.
Examples:

·         Who will give me the money?
·         With whom are you going to movie?
·         Whose books are these?
·         What will you bring to the dinner?