Showing posts with label thesis statement. Show all posts
Showing posts with label thesis statement. Show all posts

Saturday, October 5, 2019

Biography Essay

Biography Essay 

Definition 
A biographical essay demonstrates that you have a good knowledge of a person’s life and a good grasp of that person’s importance and contributions to our world.  A typical essay will consist of an outline of a person’s life, accomplishments and events in life, impact and influence on society and peers, and any background information. 
  
Thesis Development 
The thesis for a biographical essay will be some statement about this person’s contributions.  Your thesis statement for this essay will assert your point of view, opinions, or evaluation of the value of this person’s life.   

Organization 
An obvious organizational plan for this kind of essay is chronological; you cover the main events of the subject’s life as they happened.  Another strategy focuses on a few important events, building up to the one you think is most important.  A third plan divides the person’s life into categories and discusses them one at a time.  In each strategy, you are supporting and explaining your thesis. 
  
Some Helpful Tips on Writing 
  • Support your thesis with examples and details. 
  • Give sufficient background information. 
  • Including more information than is necessary.  It is easy to focus on story-telling and not tie your writing into the thesis. 



Essay Guidelines 
  • Due dates:  Pre-Write due October 10Rough Draft due October 24; Final Draft due November 11. 
  • Essay length:  500 – 700 words (between 2 and 4 pages) 
  • Rough drafts can be typed or hand-written, but must be double-spaced. 
  • Final draft format:  
  • Typed (if this is not possible, please let me know) 
  • 1 inch margins 
  • Name and date on the upper right hand corner 
  • Number the pages on the lower right hand corner 
  • Title centered above the text of the essay 



Friday, September 13, 2019

Writing 1B Class Notes -- Week 4 (Sept. 12)

Greetings!

Again, another great class.  This group of students brings a lot of positive energy and attitudes to the class.  The prompts for our Quick Write today were taken from the National Days Calendar:  National Video Game Day, National Day of Encouragement, and National Milkshake Day.  As always, if none of those options triggered any productive thinking or writing, students could write about something else.  We had good discussions about all three topics.

We did not have any Words of the Day from the students because Stephan was providing words for the Literature Circle, so the rest of the class did not need to do any.  

During the Writing portion of today's class I collected the final draft of their Descriptive Essays.  For all of the essays that they will write they are required to hand in the rough drafts with the final drafts so that I can see the specific changes.  Those who didn't do that in class this week can send me a picture or scanned version of their rough drafts with my corrections.  A couple of students mentioned that they had thrown away their rough drafts, so I will correct their papers without them.  I also reminded them that they SHOULD NOT throw away any work from this class until the end of the semester; they should also save all of their essays until the end of the year.

In Writing 1, as soon as students finish one paper we start another.  Their new assignment is a Personal Essay.  We discussed a number of topics and thesis statements. I introduced my equation for a thesis statement and a template for thesis statements that include a plan for development.  

Equation:
     Topic/Subject
  +  Opinion/Stand
Thesis Statement

Template:
     (topic/stand)     is/are      (opinion/stand)     because      (reason #1)      ,      (reason #2)     , and       (reason #3)     .


We also  took time to discuss the elements of an introduction and conclusion.  The introduction should include a hook, a thesis statement, and a "road map."  The conclusion mirrors the introduction and should restate the thesis, summarize the main points, and leave parting thoughts with the reader.  

A significant portion of the class was given to the Literature Circle for Animal Farm.  Each student had prepared for his/her role in the group, and I intentionally stepped away so that they themselves had to propel the discussion.  They each made insightful comments and I was pleased with what I heard.  We will continue to do Literature Circles throughout the year, especially considering how well they did.  For next week, we will continue with the study guide/ala carte assignments and vocabulary in addition to taking a Take Home Quiz for chapters 1 - 4.  Note:  There has been some confusion about the assignments for the book.  When I give the assignment for "Reader Responses," that means their answers to the study guide questions or the ala carte responses.  Their vocabulary worksheets do not need to be handed in until the end of the book.

Our first Parts of Speech presentation, Interjections, will be next week.  When students present their part of speech, they should either bring copies of the homework (8 students and 1 teacher) OR email the homework to me by the Tuesday before class so that I can make copies.  If they are showing a video or slide presentation, they can use their own computers or email them to me.  I have links listed below of videos that students have done in the past for the parts of speech unit.  For further inspiration, students can also scroll for older blog entries (Sept. - Nov) for links to other student projects.  

Assignments for Next Week
-- Read Ch. 5 & 6 of Animal Farm
-- 3 Reader Responses
-- 3 Vocabulary Words
-- Personal Essay Rough Draft
-- Preparation for your parts of speech presentation
     -- Interjections (Aliena) next week

Links for This Week
Class Notes

Have a great weekend!
Blessings,
Mrs. Prichard

Writing 1A Class Notes -- Week 4 (Sept. 12)

Greetings!

Again, another great class.  This group of students brings a lot of positive energy and attitudes to the class.  The prompts for our Quick Write today were taken from the National Days Calendar:  National Video Game Day, National Day of Encouragement, and National Milkshake Day.  As always, if none of those options triggered any productive thinking or writing, students could write about something else.  We had good discussions about all three topics.

This week's Words of the Day came from the students and included:
doled--verb --  fr. Middle English, dol, to share-- to distribute shares
muted-- verb -- fr. Anglo-French, ameutir, to make fluid-- to evacuate the cloaca (a bird's process of defecation) (Who knew??)
maxim -- noun -- fr. Latin, maximus, large, great-- a general truth, fundamental principle, or rule

During the Writing portion of today's class I collected the final draft of their Descriptive Essays.  For all of the essays that they will write they are required to hand in the rough drafts with the final drafts so that I can see the specific changes.  Those who didn't do that in class this week can send me a picture or scanned version of their rough drafts with my corrections.  A couple of students mentioned that they had thrown away their rough drafts, so I will correct their papers without them.  I also reminded them that they SHOULD NOT throw away any work from this class until the end of the semester; they should also save all of their essays until the end of the year.

In Writing 1, as soon as students finish one paper we start another.  Their new assignment is a Personal Essay.  We discussed a number of topics and thesis statements. I introduced my equation for a thesis statement and a template for thesis statements that include a plan for development.  

Equation:
     Topic/Subject
  +  Opinion/Stand
Thesis Statement

Template:
     (topic/stand)     is/are      (opinion/stand)     because      (reason #1)      ,      (reason #2)     , and       (reason #3)     .


We also  took time to discuss the elements of an introduction and conclusion.  The introduction should include a hook, a thesis statement, and a "road map."  The conclusion mirrors the introduction and should restate the thesis, summarize the main points, and leave parting thoughts with the reader.  

Our Grammar topic this week included .some short videos that previous classes have done for their parts of speech presentations.  Students are not required to do videos, but sometimes showing example of work others have done sparks new ideas for students. The links to those videos are listed below.  Our first Parts of Speech presentation, Interjections, will be next week.  When students present their part of speech, they should either bring copies of the homework (25 students and 1 teacher) OR email the homework to me by the Tuesday before class so that I can make copies.  If they are showing a video or slide presentation, they can use their own computers or email them to me.  

The literature discussion about Animal Farm centered on a group effort to complete a quiz on the first four chapters.  I divided the class into 6 groups, and they had to discuss the questions and find the answers in the book all together because they would all get the same grade.  I enjoyed hearing their conversations about the material they had read.  Note:  There has been some confusion about the assignments for the book.  When I give the assignment for "Reader Responses," that means their answers to the study guide questions or the ala carte responses.  Their vocabulary worksheets do not need to be handed in until the end of the book.

Assignments for Next Week
-- Read Ch. 5 & 6 of Animal Farm
-- 3 Reader Responses
-- 3 Vocabulary Words
-- Personal Essay Rough Draft
-- Preparation for your parts of speech presentation
     -- Interjections (Bennett, Josh, Jesse) next week

Links for This Week
Class Notes

Have a great weekend!
Blessings,
Mrs. Prichard

Friday, September 18, 2015

Writing 1 Class Notes -- Week 4 (September 17)

Greetings!

I thought I might have to swim to school yesterday.  Later in the afternoon we watched it rain so hard that the parking lot was flooded.  Hopefully all are safe and dry.

Our Quick Write today was inspired by the trivia question on the board at Caribou Coffee this morning:  Who said, "Question everything"?  (Socrates)  I gave the students a number of choices:  Write something all in questions; write a "Bucket List" of questions; respond to the quote.  As responses, students asked what the meaning of life was and something about a woodchuck!  I also showed the students a presentation by a spoken word artist, Taylor Mali, titled "Conviction."  He speaks about that trend to end sentences so that they sound like questions; he also encourages students to speak (and write) with conviction and authority.

The Words of the Day were:
contralto -- fr. Italian, contra, "against" and alto, "high" -- a the lowest vocal range for a female, between a mezzo-soprano and a tenor
emeritus -- fr. Latin, mereri, "to earn" -- an honorary degree earned upon retirement
mange-tout -- fr. French, "eat all" -- a variety of garden pea in which the pod is also edible.

Following our beginning of class activities, the students took the Pre-Test for our Parts of Speech unit.  The bulk of this test asked them to identify the various parts of speech (interjections, verbs, adjectives, nouns, conjunctions, adverbs, prepositions, and pronouns) within sentences.  This test will be our baseline that we will compare to the Post-Test that they will take after they've given their presentations.

Next week we start our Parts of Speech presentations.  Below is the schedule for each week:
Week 5 (9/24) -- Nouns (Tadashi)
Week 6 (10/1) -- Pronouns (Jonathan G., Jeremiah)
Week 7 (10/8) --  Adjectives (Brady, Daniel)
Week 8 (10/22) -- Adverbs  (Jack)
Week 9 (10/29) -- Verbs (Jonathan S., Eden)
Week 10 (11/5) -- Prepositions (William, Samuel)
Week 11 (11/12) -- Conjunctions (Greta, Ella)
Week 12 (11/19) -- Interjections (Cassie, Isabelle)
Week 13 (12/3) -- Review
Week 14 (12/10) -- Parts of Speech Test


The final drafts of the Descriptive Essay were due today.  I had forgotten to mention to the students that I also want them to hand in the corrected rough drafts along with the final drafts.  Some of them brought them, and others did not. For this essay, it's OK either way.  Going forward, I will remind them to hand in both drafts.  I like to see how they made corrections and revised their own work.

Our next essay is a Personal History Essay.  While the topic/subject for this essay is pretty close to home (themselves!), the challenging part will be to come up with a thesis statement.  In other words, they not only will tell a bit of a story, but they need to express some opinion or stand with it.  A Personal History Essay is a blend of narration and analysis -- a story with a purpose. These narratives can be about a special event, a difficult experience, a celebration, etc.   I've included on the blog a couple of videos about writing thesis statements.

For our literature discussion, I divided the class into 4 small groups to discuss one of the 4 chapters that we've read so far in Animal Farm; they were to specifically talk about the events in that chapter, the characters, and any problems or issues that arose in the chapter.  Following the small group discussion, we came together for a brief overview of Chapters 1 - 4.



Assignments for Next Week:
-- Write the Rough Draft of the Personal History Essay
-- Prepare your Parts of Speech presentation
-- Read Chapters 5 & 6 of Animal Farm
-- Answer 2 Study Guide questions; fill in 3 Vocabulary words

Links for this Week:
Class Notes

Have a great weekend!
Mrs. Prichard

Videos About Thesis Statements

Tuesday, October 11, 2011

Thesis Statements

During Writing 1 this week, we discussed the difference between a report and an essay.  The key difference concerns developing a thesis statement and supporting it with details.

The Purdue website is very helpful with all things writing.  This link explains how to develop and write a thesis statement.