Showing posts with label personal essay. Show all posts
Showing posts with label personal essay. Show all posts

Friday, September 13, 2019

Writing 1B Class Notes -- Week 4 (Sept. 12)

Greetings!

Again, another great class.  This group of students brings a lot of positive energy and attitudes to the class.  The prompts for our Quick Write today were taken from the National Days Calendar:  National Video Game Day, National Day of Encouragement, and National Milkshake Day.  As always, if none of those options triggered any productive thinking or writing, students could write about something else.  We had good discussions about all three topics.

We did not have any Words of the Day from the students because Stephan was providing words for the Literature Circle, so the rest of the class did not need to do any.  

During the Writing portion of today's class I collected the final draft of their Descriptive Essays.  For all of the essays that they will write they are required to hand in the rough drafts with the final drafts so that I can see the specific changes.  Those who didn't do that in class this week can send me a picture or scanned version of their rough drafts with my corrections.  A couple of students mentioned that they had thrown away their rough drafts, so I will correct their papers without them.  I also reminded them that they SHOULD NOT throw away any work from this class until the end of the semester; they should also save all of their essays until the end of the year.

In Writing 1, as soon as students finish one paper we start another.  Their new assignment is a Personal Essay.  We discussed a number of topics and thesis statements. I introduced my equation for a thesis statement and a template for thesis statements that include a plan for development.  

Equation:
     Topic/Subject
  +  Opinion/Stand
Thesis Statement

Template:
     (topic/stand)     is/are      (opinion/stand)     because      (reason #1)      ,      (reason #2)     , and       (reason #3)     .


We also  took time to discuss the elements of an introduction and conclusion.  The introduction should include a hook, a thesis statement, and a "road map."  The conclusion mirrors the introduction and should restate the thesis, summarize the main points, and leave parting thoughts with the reader.  

A significant portion of the class was given to the Literature Circle for Animal Farm.  Each student had prepared for his/her role in the group, and I intentionally stepped away so that they themselves had to propel the discussion.  They each made insightful comments and I was pleased with what I heard.  We will continue to do Literature Circles throughout the year, especially considering how well they did.  For next week, we will continue with the study guide/ala carte assignments and vocabulary in addition to taking a Take Home Quiz for chapters 1 - 4.  Note:  There has been some confusion about the assignments for the book.  When I give the assignment for "Reader Responses," that means their answers to the study guide questions or the ala carte responses.  Their vocabulary worksheets do not need to be handed in until the end of the book.

Our first Parts of Speech presentation, Interjections, will be next week.  When students present their part of speech, they should either bring copies of the homework (8 students and 1 teacher) OR email the homework to me by the Tuesday before class so that I can make copies.  If they are showing a video or slide presentation, they can use their own computers or email them to me.  I have links listed below of videos that students have done in the past for the parts of speech unit.  For further inspiration, students can also scroll for older blog entries (Sept. - Nov) for links to other student projects.  

Assignments for Next Week
-- Read Ch. 5 & 6 of Animal Farm
-- 3 Reader Responses
-- 3 Vocabulary Words
-- Personal Essay Rough Draft
-- Preparation for your parts of speech presentation
     -- Interjections (Aliena) next week

Links for This Week
Class Notes

Have a great weekend!
Blessings,
Mrs. Prichard

Writing 1A Class Notes -- Week 4 (Sept. 12)

Greetings!

Again, another great class.  This group of students brings a lot of positive energy and attitudes to the class.  The prompts for our Quick Write today were taken from the National Days Calendar:  National Video Game Day, National Day of Encouragement, and National Milkshake Day.  As always, if none of those options triggered any productive thinking or writing, students could write about something else.  We had good discussions about all three topics.

This week's Words of the Day came from the students and included:
doled--verb --  fr. Middle English, dol, to share-- to distribute shares
muted-- verb -- fr. Anglo-French, ameutir, to make fluid-- to evacuate the cloaca (a bird's process of defecation) (Who knew??)
maxim -- noun -- fr. Latin, maximus, large, great-- a general truth, fundamental principle, or rule

During the Writing portion of today's class I collected the final draft of their Descriptive Essays.  For all of the essays that they will write they are required to hand in the rough drafts with the final drafts so that I can see the specific changes.  Those who didn't do that in class this week can send me a picture or scanned version of their rough drafts with my corrections.  A couple of students mentioned that they had thrown away their rough drafts, so I will correct their papers without them.  I also reminded them that they SHOULD NOT throw away any work from this class until the end of the semester; they should also save all of their essays until the end of the year.

In Writing 1, as soon as students finish one paper we start another.  Their new assignment is a Personal Essay.  We discussed a number of topics and thesis statements. I introduced my equation for a thesis statement and a template for thesis statements that include a plan for development.  

Equation:
     Topic/Subject
  +  Opinion/Stand
Thesis Statement

Template:
     (topic/stand)     is/are      (opinion/stand)     because      (reason #1)      ,      (reason #2)     , and       (reason #3)     .


We also  took time to discuss the elements of an introduction and conclusion.  The introduction should include a hook, a thesis statement, and a "road map."  The conclusion mirrors the introduction and should restate the thesis, summarize the main points, and leave parting thoughts with the reader.  

Our Grammar topic this week included .some short videos that previous classes have done for their parts of speech presentations.  Students are not required to do videos, but sometimes showing example of work others have done sparks new ideas for students. The links to those videos are listed below.  Our first Parts of Speech presentation, Interjections, will be next week.  When students present their part of speech, they should either bring copies of the homework (25 students and 1 teacher) OR email the homework to me by the Tuesday before class so that I can make copies.  If they are showing a video or slide presentation, they can use their own computers or email them to me.  

The literature discussion about Animal Farm centered on a group effort to complete a quiz on the first four chapters.  I divided the class into 6 groups, and they had to discuss the questions and find the answers in the book all together because they would all get the same grade.  I enjoyed hearing their conversations about the material they had read.  Note:  There has been some confusion about the assignments for the book.  When I give the assignment for "Reader Responses," that means their answers to the study guide questions or the ala carte responses.  Their vocabulary worksheets do not need to be handed in until the end of the book.

Assignments for Next Week
-- Read Ch. 5 & 6 of Animal Farm
-- 3 Reader Responses
-- 3 Vocabulary Words
-- Personal Essay Rough Draft
-- Preparation for your parts of speech presentation
     -- Interjections (Bennett, Josh, Jesse) next week

Links for This Week
Class Notes

Have a great weekend!
Blessings,
Mrs. Prichard

Personal Essay


Personal Essay

Definition
            In a Personal Essay, the writer tells a story about a series of events, a personal experience, or a topic of personal interest.  The writer needs to explain the event(s) clearly enough for the reader to follow what happened and when it happened or to understand the importance of the topic.  The writer also has to write with enough details to keep the reader’s attention and interest.  Your goal should be to develop an essay that informs and/or entertains, and that impels readers to think about their own lives.
           

Organization of a Personal Essay
Just about anything in your life that interests you, amuses you, angers you, or makes you think is a possible subject for a personal essay.  Dig as deep into your experience as you can.  As you think about a topic, event, person, or place of significance, look for an emerging focus, main idea, or viewpoint.
            A personal essay is a blend of narrative (sharing some aspect of your life) and analysis (commenting upon this time).


Thesis Statements
            The thesis statement of your essay presents the subject of the narration and its significance.  Your essay should reveal your attitude or opinion about the event.  Your essay can also tell a message or lesson related to the event.


Some Helpful Tips on Writing
– Decide on the story you want to tell, and think about what the story means to you.
– What attitude would you like the reader to learn by reading your story?  What feeling or attitude would you like the reader to have about the story you are telling?
– Outline what happened first, second, third, and so on.  Don’t forget important, specific details.  Divide the action into major blocks.  Determine the logical breaks.
– Focus on the people involved in your narrative, and try to describe them accurately.
– Include the feelings you experienced at different times in you story.
– Avoid stringing together a series of events without dramatizing any of them or showing their significance.
– Avoid a list.  Make sure the events are logically connected with appropriate transitions to help the reader follow the sequence of events.


Essay Guidelines
– Due dates:  Rough Draft due September 19; Final Draft due October 3.
– Essay length:  at least 300 words (about 1 page)
– Rough drafts can be typed or hand-written, but must be double-spaced.
– Final draft format:
– Typed (if this is not possible, please let me know)
– 1 inch margins
– Name and date on the upper right hand corner
– Number the pages on the lower right hand corner
– Title centered above the text of the essay


Friday, September 15, 2017

Personal History Essay


Definition
            In a Personal Essay, the writer tells a story about a series of events.  The writer needs to explain the event(s) clearly enough for the reader to follow what happened and when it happened.  The writer also has to tell the story dramatically enough to keep the reader’s attention and interest.  Your goal should be to develop an essay that informs and/or entertains, and that impels readers to think about their own lives.
           

Organization of a Personal Essay
Just about anything in your life that interests you, amuses you, angers you, or makes you think is a possible subject for a personal essay.  Dig as deep into your experience as you can.  As you think about a topic, event, person, or place of significance, look for an emerging focus, main idea, or viewpoint.
            A personal essay is a blend of narrative (sharing some aspect of your life) and analysis (commenting upon this time).


Thesis Statements
            The thesis statement of your essay presents the subject of the narration and its significance.  Your essay should reveal your attitude or opinion about the event.  Your essay can also tell a message or lesson related to the event.


Some Helpful Tips on Writing
– Decide on the story you want to tell, and think about what the story means to you.
– What attitude would you like the reader to learn by reading your story?  What feeling or attitude would you like the reader to have about the story you are telling?
– Outline what happened first, second, third, and so on.  Don’t forget important, specific details.  Divide the action into major blocks.  Determine the logical breaks.
– Focus on the people involved in your narrative, and try to describe them accurately.
– Include the feelings you experienced at different times in you story.
– Avoid stringing together a series of events without dramatizing any of them or showing their significance.
– Avoid a list.  Make sure the events are logically connected with appropriate transitions to help the reader follow the sequence of events.


Essay Guidelines
– Due dates:  Rough Draft due September 21; Final Draft due October 5.
– Essay length:  at least 300 words (about 1 page)
– Rough drafts can be typed or hand-written, but must be double-spaced.
– Final draft format:
– Typed (if this is not possible, please let me know)
– 1 inch margins
– Name and date on the upper right hand corner
– Number the pages on the lower right hand corner
– Title centered above the text of the essay


Friday, September 18, 2015

Personal History Essay

Personal History Essay

Definition
            In a Personal Essay, the writer tells a story about a series of events.  The writer needs to explain the event(s) clearly enough for the reader to follow what happened and when it happened.  The writer also has to tell the story dramatically enough to keep the reader’s attention and interest.  Your goal should be to develop an essay that informs and/or entertains, and that impels readers to think about their own lives.
           

Organization of a Personal Essay
Just about anything in your life that interests you, amuses you, angers you, or makes you think is a possible subject for a personal essay.  Dig as deep into your experience as you can.  As you think about a topic, event, person, or place of significance, look for an emerging focus, main idea, or viewpoint.
            A personal essay is a blend of narrative (sharing some aspect of your life) and analysis (commenting upon this time).


Thesis Statements
            The thesis statement of your essay presents the subject of the narration and its significance.  Your essay should reveal your attitude or opinion about the event.  Your essay can also tell a message or lesson related to the event.


Some Helpful Tips on Writing
– Decide on the story you want to tell, and think about what the story means to you.
– What attitude would you like the reader to learn by reading your story?  What feeling or attitude would you like the reader to have about the story you are telling?
– Outline what happened first, second, third, and so on.  Don’t forget important, specific details.  Divide the action into major blocks.  Determine the logical breaks.
– Focus on the people involved in your narrative, and try to describe them accurately.
– Include the feelings you experienced at different times in you story.
– Avoid stringing together a series of events without dramatizing any of them or showing their significance.
– Avoid a list.  Make sure the events are logically connected with appropriate transitions to help the reader follow the sequence of events.


Essay Guidelines
– Due dates:  Rough Draft due September 24; Final Draft due October 8.
– Essay length:  at least 300 words (about 1 page)
– Rough drafts can be typed or hand-written, but must be double-spaced.
– Final draft format:
– Typed (if this is not possible, please let me know)
– 1 inch margins
– Name and date on the upper right hand corner
– Number the pages on the lower right hand corner
– Title centered above the text of the essay


Friday, September 20, 2013

Personal History Essay

Personal History Essay

Definition
            In a Personal Essay, the writer tells a story about a series of events.  The writer needs to explain the event(s) clearly enough for the reader to follow what happened and when it happened.  The writer also has to tell the story dramatically enough to keep the reader’s attention and interest.  Your goal should be to develop an essay that informs and/or entertains, and that impels readers to think about their own lives.
           

Organization of a Personal Essay
Just about anything in your life that interests you, amuses you, angers you, or makes you think is a possible subject for a personal essay.  Dig as deep into your experience as you can.  As you think about a topic, event, person, or place of significance, look for an emerging focus, main idea, or viewpoint.
            A personal essay is a blend of narrative (sharing some aspect of your life) and analysis (commenting upon this time).


Thesis Statements
            The thesis statement of your essay presents the subject of the narration and its significance.  Your essay should reveal your attitude or opinion about the event.  Your essay can also tell a message or lesson related to the event.


Some Helpful Tips on Writing
– Decide on the story you want to tell, and think about what the story means to you.
– What attitude would you like the reader to learn by reading your story?  What feeling or attitude would you like the reader to have about the story you are telling?
– Outline what happened first, second, third, and so on.  Don’t forget important, specific details.  Divide the action into major blocks.  Determine the logical breaks.
– Focus on the people involved in your narrative, and try to describe them accurately.
– Include the feelings you experienced at different times in you story.
– Avoid stringing together a series of events without dramatizing any of them or showing their significance.
– Avoid a list.  Make sure the events are logically connected with appropriate transitions to help the reader follow the sequence of events.


Essay Guidelines
– Due dates:  Rough Draft due September 26; Final Draft due October 10.
– Essay length:  at least 300 words (about 1 page)
– Rough drafts can be typed or hand-written, but must be double-spaced.
– Final draft format:
– Typed (if this is not possible, please let me know)
– 1 inch margins
– Name and date on the upper right hand corner
– Number the pages on the lower right hand corner
– Title centered above the text of the essay