Showing posts with label Week 4. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Week 4. Show all posts

Thursday, February 3, 2022

Writing 1 Class Notes -- Week 4 (February 3)

Greetings!

We had an fun class today -- as usual, we covered a lot of material.  We started with our Quick Write.  Here are the prompts for the day:
  • February 2 –  World Read Aloud Day.  Do you have a favorite story that was read aloud to you when you were young?  Write about it.

  • February 4, 2004 –  the day that Facebook was launched.  Do you use Facebook?  What are your thoughts about social media?

  • February 4, 1789 – the day that George Washington was elected our first president by a unanimous vote of the first electoral college.  Do you have any opinions about the electoral college?  Do you have opinions about what makes for a good elected leader?


Our Words of the Day came from Megan, Grace, and Ike:
hoopla-- fr. American English, earlier houp-la, exclamation accompanying quick movement (1870), perhaps borrowed from French houp-là "upsy-daisy," also a cry to dogs, horses, etc. 
poppycock--  fr. American English -- trivial talk; nonsense
xertz-- fr. unknown origin; to gulp something down quickly and/or in a greedy fashion 
Pneumonoultramicroscopicsilicovolcanoconiosis -- a term for a lung disease caused by inhaling silica dust, 

I handed back the rough drafts of the Narrative Essays.  These were very enjoyable essays to read.  Many students wrote more than they usually did, and they told interesting stories in the contexts of their essays.  As per my practice, I go over common mistakes and use these for grammar instruction.  This week I had them go to the white board and write their top three mistakes.  The most common errors I found in their write had to do with punctuating dialogue, paragraph formation, comma splice sentences, and compound sentences with commas.  Students are to revise their rough drafts into final drafts for next week.  I forgot to mention in class, but there's a form on Google Classroom for them to list their first 5 mistakes.  NOTE:  Remember to bring your corrected rough draft to class next week to hand in with the final draft.

We had a short discussion about Richard Hannay and The Thirty-Nine Steps.  We talked about what we liked and didn't like about the book.  The students had some profound statements about the plot and the writing style.  We watched a clip from the 2008 adaption of the book and then discussed if the Hannay in the movie was like the one we imagined.  In the chapters that they will read for next week, the spy aspect of the story will evolve, so that by the end, there is a solution to the whole mysterious situation.  For next week, they will read Chapters 7 & 8 and take a quiz.  If they want, they can do the study guide questions for extra credit.

Our Grammar instruction included a sentence review and prepositional phrases review.  We worked on it for a bit in class, and students should correct their work before handing it in.  

Assignments for next week

Friday, September 17, 2021

Writing 1 Class Notes -- Week 4 (September 16)

 Greetings!


This week's class was productive, but I always find myself wishing we had more time together.  They are a great group of students!


Quick Write
This week's prompts was a little more academic.  On September 16, 1620, the Mayflower departed from England.  In addition to bringing faith to this new land, the Pilgrims helped lay the foundation for democratic, self-government for the sake of community well-being in their document, the Mayflower Compact.  I had the students write about what they felt were essential rights AND responsibilities.  These could either be attributed in a large scale to humanity as a whole or closer to home (e.g. I have a right to my personal space and a responsibility to keep it clean.)  AND, if they were not thinking so deeply, they could write about their favorite fall beverage!


No Words of the Day this week.

Writing Discussion
I handed back rough drafts and went over common mistakes.  Students were to start a document in their folders or notebooks titled either "Watch out for ..." or "Areas to Work On."  On this page I want students to keep track of their own common writing mistakes.  We will refer to this list often over the course of the year, using it to set personal writing goals and to gauge progress.

Literature Discussion
We're reading Animal Farm, and this week we had a good discussion about our reading.  We talked about the primary characters and a timeline of the plot so far.  We also did a little singing. If you have been in the hallway, you would have heard animal noises to the tune of La Cucaracha and Clementine.  

Grammar Discussion
Students were to have taken their pre-test, which I handed back this week.  For pre-tests, students are given a base score, regardless of the number correct.  Since we are covering Parts of Speech using the memory device IVAN CAPP, we had a short contest for our mascot.  A number of students contributed drawings and pictures.  I'll let them know the winner next week.

I've fielded a number of questions about the Parts of Speech presentations.  Students have been put in groups of 3, and they are to research and come up with explanations about their assigned parts of speech.  Additionally, they are to come up with an activity/game/video for the class.  Some students use PowerPoint or other types of presentations.  Sometimes videos are helpful.  I've extended the first presentation.  Instead of starting next week, I've pushed the first presentation off until Sept. 30.  Interjections and Verbs will present on that week.  STUDENTS SHOULD CONNECT WITH THEIR GROUP MEMBERS TO PLAN!

Parts of Speech Groups
Interjections -- Peytan, Sarah, Noah
Verbs -- Estelle, Johnny
Adjectives -- Megan, Ava, Rhyan
Nouns -- Grace, Jaden, Eliana
Conjunctions -- Molly, Charissa, Katelyn
Adverbs -- James, Phoebe, Joren
Prepositions -- Chase, Will, Liam
Pronouns -- Kevin, Evan, Ike