BAD WRITING SAMPLES
#1 The
amount of grammer and usage error’s today is astounding. Not to mention
spelling. If I was a teacher, I’d feel badly that less and less students seem
to understand the basic principals of good writing. Neither the oldest high
school students nor the youngest kindergartner know proper usage. A student
often thinks they can depend on word processing programs to correct they’re
errors. Know way!
Watching TV
all the time, its easy to see why their having trouble. TV interferes with them
studying and it’s strong affect on children has alot to due with their grades.
There’s other factors, too, including the indifference of parents like you and
I. A Mom or Dad often doesn’t know grammer themselves. We should tell are
children to study hard like we did at they’re age and to watch less TV then
their classmates.
#2 The
television can be helpful sometimes, especially when people watch the news, but
of course we all know that you can’t get everyone to watch the news. Some
people watch television to learn about things that go on in our world. And
there’s people that watch it cause there’s nothing else to do. People that
watch television because there’s nothing else to do are making television
harmful because almost all of the shows have something wrong with them like the
language, their actions, and some of the things that they show. And most of the
kids that watch these shows want to be the same way. Like say that a teenager
killed someone, the kids that watch it and think that’s cool and do the same
thing when they get older.
Some shows
are learning experienses like a show on saving our economy, if you watched this you could help save the economy.
I think that there are too many people using television in the harmful way such
as gaining weight from sitting in front of the television too much. There are
also a log of people who stay away from television as often as they can and try
to be more active, but still do watch the educational way of shows and that is
the education way of doing it. There are also a lot of controversy going on about
some of the things they on television. But it you think about it television is
very helpful.
#3 As
that there are alot of people (weather they are philosophers or not) there are
many exceptions to moral rules or laws. One thing I find interesting about
Immanuel Kant, are his strong feelings toward not lying at any time ever no
matter what and not to deal with the consequences and the considerations of
individual situations and circumstances and possible exceptions that need to be
accounted for when making a decision of morality and ethics. Immanuel Kant felt
strongly that lying was always wrong, he was against it. But whose to say?
Wasn’t lying just Kants biggest how shall I say "pet-peeve"? "No
lying ever, no exceptions" needs to be addressed more seriously in the
future by later philosophers, if you ask me its worth a try. Immanuel Kant was
probably one of the most supportive philosiphers of absolute rules in the
ethical and moral decision-making systems of thought I have studied.
