Thursday, December 23, 2021

Writing 1 -- Fall 2021 Grades are Coming!

 Dear CHAT Writing 1 Students & Parents,


I've just finished calculating the grades for the Fall semester, and you will be finding them in your inbox by the end of the day.  As tutors, these are suggested grades for you as homeschooling families to consider.

For those who are new to my classes, let me share my thoughts on grades.  As I homeschooled my own children, I didn't give them grades.  I felt that grades were far too subjective, coming from their mother.  Instead, I taught my own children for mastery, and we didn't proceed with a topic until they were ready, no matter how long that took.  In a class setting, knowing where each student is with regards to his/her understanding of a topic is not always possible, so any grade given is not a complete representation of what the student learned or accomplished this year.

Letter grades are a funny thing.  For some students, it becomes the only motivation for doing well.  For some, it becomes a measure of their worth as a person or as an academic learner.  I personally don't like these "side effects" of the grading system.  On the other hand, grades can be a valid reflection and reward for working hard, being diligent, and understanding the materials.

When teaching students to be good writers, I give a lot of consideration for growth and improvement. Each student has a starting place; over time I look for him or her to learn the mechanics of grammar, good writing techniques, and analytical thinking skills.

For this class, I gave points for attendance, participation, short assignments, literature assignments, grammar exercises, and longer essays. (I tend to be an "easy grader" and like to see my students encouraged to do their best.)  The final drafts of the essay assignments were graded using a rubric that divided the papers into the following categories:  focus, content, organization, and mechanics.  

The scores for class work is divided into the following categories:  Assignments (Quick Writes and in class activities), Writing, Literature, and Grammar.  A student may have been strong in one area and not in another, and this will be reflected in these categories.  These scores are also weighted; in other words, not all of the categories have the same importance. The Quick Write points are worth are 15% of the total grade, the Writing assignments are 30%, the Literature homework is 28%, and the Grammar work is 27%.

The grade breakdowns for Writing 1 are as follows:
98% - 100% (A+), 93% - 97% (A), 90% - 92% (A-),
87% - 89% (B+), 83% - 86% (B), 80 % - 82% (B-),
77% - 77% (C+), 73% - 76% (C), 70% - 72% (C-),
67% - 69% (D+), 63% - 66% (D), 60% - 62% (D-),
55% - 59% (Pass), 50% - 54% (Fail); 0% - 49% (Incomplete)

Each student (and parents) will receive an e-mail with percentages and a suggested overall grade for this semester.  I’ve seen each student improve with each paper.  Good Work!

Blessings,
Tammy Prichard

Writing 1 -- Grades are Coming!

Thursday, December 16, 2021

Writing 1 Class Notes -- Week 15 (December 16)

 Greetings!

We have a wonderful day today.  I try to get most of the hard work of the class done before this last week so that we could have some fun on this final day.  

Quick Write
For our final Quick Write, I had the students do a mini reflection about their semester.  I asked them to write about what worked well, what didn't work, what amazing "thing" they learned, and what they might do differently next semester.  Reflection is a powerful learning tool; when students take time to think about their learning and themselves.

Homework & Grades
Students handed in their final drafts of their History Essays.  I will go over the essays and any other homework that was handed in; my goal is to have final grades out soon.  I mentioned to the class that I will take any homework December 19 at 11:59 p.m. If there are any questions, please contact me.  Because I have final drafts from all of the classes, I know that I won't have the essays and homework ready for final grades until after Christmas.  Look for them some time after the New Year.  

A Contest
Following the Quick Write, we had the Annual Writing 1 Ugly Christmas Sweater Contest.  They were pretty intent on their drawing and coloring, which I complemented with a video of a fire with Christmas music.  Oh, and we had the lights turned down.   After they drew and colored, we voted on the best (and it wasn't ugly at all!) picture.  Great work, Carmela!

A "Test"
After the coloring, we had a "test" in the shape of a Jeopardy game.  Most of the categories were related to A Christmas Carol, but there was one for Christmas jokes.  I divided the class into 4 teams, and they took turns answering questions.  There were 20 questions which they answered or tried to answer; when they got the wrong answer, they lost points.  It was a fairly competitive game/test.  (By the way, research also indicates that using gamification to ignite learning increases recall, retention, and cognitive growth.  So while we were having fun, we were still intellectually engaged in our topics.) 

Links for this Week
Writing 1 Class Notes -- Week 15 (December 16)
Reindeer Games (all of the links for today's class)

My prayer is that all of you have a great Christmas that includes lots of love and laughter!
Blessings,
Mrs. Prichard

Thursday, December 9, 2021

Writing 1 Class Notes -- Week 14 (December 9)

 Greetings!


We had a wonderful day in class today.  A lot of the hard work of the semester is over, so we our "work" today was a little more fun.

Quick Write
We had 3 options for today:  1) Favorite family Christmas traditions; 2) Invent a new tradition; and 3) what toy/item have you always wanted?

Words of the Day
natal -- fr. Latin natus, "pertaining to one's birth" -- often this word is used to describe the star that appeared over Bethlehem, i.e. Jesus' natal star  [Note:  nativity also comes from the same root.]
epiphany -- fr. Greek epiphainein, "to reveal" -- a festival, manifestation, or commemoration; traditionally, Epiphany is on January 6 and is a celebration of the the manifestation of Christ to the Gentiles as represented by the Magi (Matthew 2:1–12).
poinsettia -- fr. John Poinsett, an ambassador to Mexico who brought this plant to the attention of botanists -- a plant of large green leaves and large red blossoms that is used to decorate at Christmas.
wassail -- fr. Old Norse, ves heill, "be well/healthy" -- a greeting of good cheer; also hot mulled cider, drunk traditionally as an integral part of wassailing, a Medieval Christmastide English  ritual intended to ensure a good cider apple harvest the following year.
swaddling -- fr. Middle English, swathlen, to bind with clothes -- longs strips of cloth used to wrap or bind.  Jesus was "laid in swaddling clothes."   

Writing
I handed back the rough drafts of their History Essays.  I really enjoyed reading these; they've chosen some fascinating topics, and they're becoming better writers.  The final drafts are due next week.  They MUST bring their rough drafts back to class next week so that I can use them to correct the final drafts.  

Grammar
The class handed in their Take Home Post Test for the Parts of Speech unit.  With the exception of the fast page, it was identical to the Pre-Test.  I explained to the class that the best way of learning grammar is through lots of reading and writing. Direct instruction of grammar is important and helpful, and combined with literature and writing it can be pretty potent.  Next semester we'll be working on sentence structures.


Literature
This is where we had some fun today.  We have finished our second book, A Christmas Carol by Charles Dickens.  The class was divided into 4 groups and were given types of presentations using A Christmas Carol characters and scenes.  They were to create a one minute story , a late night talk show, a news broadcast, a mime of a scene, or a new ghost for Scrooge.  They did a marvelous job, and I loved their creativity!




Next Week
Our last week of the semester is next week, December 16.  All work should be handed in by that date.  That said, I've given them until Sunday, December 19 to get any last work in.  They should not wait until then to do their work and hand it in.  Next week we will have our "Classy Classmas Party."  I will bring treats, and students can bring goodies if they like.  We will have a contest, play a Jeopardy Game, and sing some songs.  

Assignments for Next Week:



Thursday, November 18, 2021

Writing 1 Class Notes -- Week 12 (November 18)

 

Greetings!


We had a good day in class and covered a lot of ground.

Quick Write
For today's Quick Writes, we had the following prompts:
1 -- Contribute to the list of Quick Write ideas to be used for my classes for the rest of the year.
2 -- Write about a sports mis-hap that happened to you or that you know about.
3 -- November 18 is National Princess Day and November 16, 1553, was the day that Queen Elizabeth I became the queen of England following the death of her sister, Mary.  Write about any royalty that you are especially interested in.


Homework Check
A reminder to students:  make sure you correct your grammar worksheets and show on the worksheet or the Google Classroom assignment that you're corrected it.  Also, make sure you turn in assignments that you've done on Google Classroom.  A number of assignments have been finished, but students have forgotten to turn the work in .  

Writing Discussion
Students have been assigned another essay -- a History Essay.  The Pre-Write and Rough Draft are due the week after Thanksgiving break.  We did some brainstorming about topics and then some more for possible thesis statements.  Coming up with thesis statements is one of the hard parts of writing a paper.  The thesis statement is more than a topic sentence; it is a sentence that tells the reader what the topic is and what the writer's stand or opinion is.  When students are thinking about their topics, they should also be thinking about that topic's importance or significance.  I often call this the "Why should I care?" element.

Literature Discussion
We are three chapters (Staves) into A Christmas Carol.  We've read about Marley, the Ghost of Christmas Past, and the Ghost of Christmas Present.  Most of my questions concerned details about the story and not as many analysis questions.  A number of students didn't bring their books to class.  Remember to bring them next week.

Grammar
We had our last presentation for our parts of speech unit.  Today we heard from the Prepositions trio.  They had a slide presentation, a video, and a game.  Students have Prepositions worksheets and evaluation to do for homework.  They also have a review of the last 4 parts of speech before the final test.  (CAPP Review)

Assignments for December 2
Prepositions Evaluation (Google Classroom)
CAPP Review -- Conjunctions (Google Classroom)
CAPP Review -- Adverbs (Google Classroom)
CAPP Review -- Pronouns (Google Classroom)
CAPP Review -- Prepositions (Google Classroom)
Read Stave 4 of A Christmas Carol


Links for This Week
Writing 1 Class Notes -- Week 12 (November 18)


Have a great Thanksgiving weekend!
Blessings!
Mrs. Prichard

Saturday, November 13, 2021

Writing 1 Class Notes -- Week 11 (November 11)


 

Greetings!


We had another full class time this week.  When I first started teaching at CHAT, I didn't know how I would fill a 90 minute class.  Now I wish I could have the students for even more time because there's always more to cover.  

Quick Write
Our prompts for today:
Nov. 10 was the birthday of the US Marine Corps
Nov. 11 was Veterans/Armistice Day
Nov. 12  was National Chicken Soup for your Soul
Students could write something about the military or about something that has to do with social/mental/emotional self-care.

Words of the Day
Today's words were war-related:
military -- fr. Latin militis, "soldier" -- of or relating to war, soldiers, army
veteran -- fr. Latin, veteranus, "old, aged, experienced" -- someone who has served in the military; someone who has had long experience in an occupation/skill
armistice -- fr. Latin, arma, "weapons" and stitium, "to stand, be firm" -- a temporary halt in battles
war -- fr. PIE (Proto-Indo-European) wers, "to confuse, mix up" -- a fight carried on in battle using arms

Writing Instruction
The final drafts of the Biography Essay were due this week, and we're on to the next essay -- a History Essay.  For the Biography Essay, students were to write about the significance of a person, and for the History essay, students should discuss the significance in history and culture of an event, item, or period.  For the rest of the essays that they will write for Writing 1, students will write a Pre-Write, Rough Draft, and Final Draft.  I have the Pre-Write "due" next week because I want students to take the week to plan and research for their essays.  However, they don't have to hand in the pre-writes until they hand in the rough drafts, which will be on December 2 (3 weeks from this week.)

Literature
We didn't talk about Stave Two of A Christmas Carol today.  Next week we'll cover Staves Two and Three.

Grammar
We had a good presentation about Pronouns that also included a little "story time."  Students have pronouns homework and a pronouns evaluation to do for their Grammar homework.  Next week, our final presenation:  Prepositions.

Assignments for Next Week
First 5 Corrections (if not done)
History Essay Pre-Write (work on for 11/19 and due 12/2)
Read Stave Three of A Christmas Carol

Links for This Week
Writing 1 Class Notes -- Week 11 (November 11)

Enjoy the changing of the seasons!!
Blessings,
Mrs. Prichard

Thursday, November 4, 2021

Writing 1 Class Notes -- Week 10 (November 4)

 Greetings!


We had a full day, but the we do every week!  We had some difficulties with Zoom today.  I'm not really sure what happened, but I've recorded the class and posted it on Google Classroom.  The link is at the bottom.

For today, we had a few options:
Students could write about favorite sandwiches, candy, and political activism.


Words of the Day
Autumn -- fr. Latin autumnus, "increase" -- the season of harvest between summer and winter
Equinox -- fr. Latin aequus, "equal" and nox, "night" -- the time when day and night are equal length
Cornucopia -- fr. Latin cornu, "horn" and copiae, "plenty" -- a horn-shaped container containing food, drink in endless supply
Susurrus -- fr. Latin susurrus, "humming, whispering" -- a soft murmuring or whispering sound
Hibernaculum -- fr. Latin hibernaculum, "winter residence" -- the winter quarters of a hibernating animal

Homework Check
Usually our first concern after our beginning of class activities is to check in regarding homework.  Because last week was a rough draft week for all 3 of my CHAT classes, I did not enter all of the scores for the other homework.  That will be done by next week.

Writing Discussion
I handed back their rough drafts of the Biography Essays.  We talked about these common writing errors:  the word 'things," parallel structure, using names, and writing out numbers.  Students should revise their rough drafts into final drafts. They were also given an 1/2 sheet to list their first 5 corrections on the their essays and their primary area to work on.  Those who still need to hand in their rough drafts, should send me an email as soon as they've submitted their essays on Google Classroom.

Literature Discussion
Students have read the first "Stave" of A Christmas Carol.  We did a "roll call" and listed the characters we've met so far in the book.  We also talked about the mood and tone of the book thus far.  The students came up with some good, descriptive words:  eerie, melancholy, misanthropic.  For homework, the students should read Stave Two, answer 3 discussion questions, and complete a discussion question on Google Classroom.  

Grammar
The Adverbs group gave a good presentation on Adverbs.  We watched a short video and the students had a quick game that they played.  They have a two-sided worksheet to do for homework.

Assignments for Next Week
-- Read Stave Two of A Christmas Carol

Links for This Week
-- Writing 1 Class Notes -- Week 10 (November 4)

Have a wonderful weekend!  Enjoy your extra hour of sleep!
Blessings,
Mrs. Prichard

Thursday, October 14, 2021

Writing 1 Class Notes -- Week 8 (October 14)

 


Greetings!


Great class today, as always.  This is a lively and engaged group of students.   Writing 1 is a great part of my Thursday!

Quick Write
For today's Quick Write, I asked students to choose a topic about which they have strong opinions.  It could be something light-hearted and close to home, or it could be a topic of current cultural or political interest.  Then, they were to think about the perspectives of those who are on the other side of the issue.  My goal is that they would take some time consider what others think.  Not so that they could change their minds about their opinions, but so that they could be more understanding of those who they might view as opponents.  Being able to do this is a mark of a mature, wise, and graceful thinker.

Words of the Day
stubborn -- fr, OE, stybb, "stump" -- fixed or set in an opinion; refusing to change
dogmatic -- fr. Greek, dogmatikos, "pertaining to doctrines" -- adhering only to principles or dogma 
indomitable -- fr. Latin, in, "not" and domitare, "to tame" -- incapable of being subdued
inexorable -- fr. Latin, in "not" and exorabilis, "moved/persuaded by entreaty" -- not convinced or persuaded by requests or petitions.

Writing 
Students handed in their Final Drafts of their Personal Essays.  As soon as we complete one essay, we start the next. Our next essay is a Biography Essay.  I talked about the differences between a report and an essay.  In this essay, they are to make sure that they have an opinion about the person and write in a way to show the significance/importance of that person.  For our previous papers, we followed a 2-step process (rough draft to final draft).  For the rest of the papers we write this year, we'll follow a 3-step process:  pre-write (which could include a mind map or outline) to a rough draft to a final draft.  The pre-write and rough draft of the Biography Essay is due on October 28.

Literature 
We've finished Animal Farm, and as a final activity, we had campaign speeches.  I had the students group themselves according to the character they had chosen to write a character sketch; as a group, they put together a campaign speech -- claiming that their character would make the best leader of Animal Farm.

The next book that we'll read is Charles Dickens's A Christmas Carol.  I gave them their books.  Below I'm posting the background information and the Introduction Quiz.  The quiz is not due until Nov. 4.

Grammar
We're continuing with the Parts of Speech presentations, and today we had the Nouns group.  They gave a slide presentation and had a game for the students to play.  They have homework to practice identifying nouns.  They also have an "IVAN" review of the first 4 parts of speech that we've covered.  (A reminder:  students should also fill out the evaluation for the presentation.)

Fall Break
We don't have CHAT classes next week; October 20 & 21 are our Fall Break days.  I hope you can find some fun outside activities to do.


Homework for October 28
Animal Farm Final (on Google Classroom)
IVAN Review (on Google Classroom -- due Nov. 4)
A Christmas Carol Intro Quiz (on Google Classroom -- due Nov. 4)

Links for this week:
Writing 1 Class Notes -- Week 8 (October 14)

Have a marvelous Fall Break!
Blessings,
Mrs. Prichard